Mischief, by Charlotte Armstrong
In Women Crime Writers: Four Suspense Novels of
the 1950s, edited by Sarah Weinman
New York,
NY: The Library of America, 2015
Mischief originally published in 1950
List of
main characters:
Peter O.
Jones
Ruth O.
Jones
Bunny O.
Jones, the Jones’s daughter
Eddie
Munro, elevator operator at the Hotel Majestic
Nell
Munro, Eddie’s niece
Jed
Towers, hotel guest
Lyn
Lesley
This story is really a novella: It’s only 133
pages long in the collection in which I found it. Mischief is the basis for the film noir Don’t Bother to Knock. I saw the film first and had high hopes for
reading the novel. It does happen every once in a great while, however, that
the film version hits all the right spots and the novel version doesn’t hit as
many.
In this
case, the screenwriter, Daniel Taradash, for Don’t Bother to Knock made all the right decisions in the changes
made to Charlotte Armstrong’s story. I suspect that these decisions didn’t
begin with Taradash; I imagine Marilyn Monroe, cast as Nell Forbes in the film
(the character is Nell Munro in the novel), meant that turning the attention on
her character was the real reason behind it all. It led to a better story on
film.
Click
here for my blog post about Don’t Bother
to Knock, which I wrote for the Classic Movie Blog Association’s 2019 Spring Blogathon:
Femmes/Hommes Fatale of Film Noir. You can still read all the entries for the blogathon by clicking here.
(This blog post about
the novel Mischief contains spoilers
about the novel and the film Don’t Bother
to Knock.)
◊
The narrative in the novel
starts with the Jones family, not with Lyn Lesley, as in the film version. The
stories of the Joneses (Peter, Ruth, and their daughter Bunny); Nell Munro,
Bunny’s babysitter; and Nell’s uncle Eddie Munro are intertwined from the
beginning. Jed Towers is introduced from the beginning, but he is only a guest
in the same hotel at that point. Lyn Lesley is introduced later, when Jed meets
her for their date. It’s not clear until the end of Chapter 4 and all of
Chapter 5 that Jed Towers and Lyn Lesley are part of the Jones/Munro story,
too.
◊
The film version presents
Nell much more sympathetically. She gets to tell her story of loss and grief to
Jed Towers, who begins to feel some compassion for her in the film. Nell
suffered a nervous breakdown after the death of her boyfriend Philip, and she
tells Jed about the night that her boyfriend Philip was given up for lost at
sea.
◊
In the novel, Nell is
responsible for the accidental death of her parents in a fire she supposedly
set while sleepwalking. The implication is that she might have gotten away with
their murder.
◊ Nell attacks Bunny in both the novel and the
film, and Bunny’s mother, Ruth Jones, interrupts her and fights her until Jed
shows up. In the novel, Jed drags Nell, by grabbing her hair, off Ruth; in the
film, Jed intervenes just enough to keep the two women from fighting any
further and really hurting one another.
◊ In the novel, Jed is shot by the hotel
detective while Jed is still holding on to Nell because Eva Ballew, another
hotel guest, believes Nell’s story that Jed attacked her. Nell concocts this
story in the film, too. It leads to a very brief hunt for Jed, but nothing
comes of it once he joins the search for Nell.
◊ Nell is taken away by the hotel detective
Perrin in the novel, not by the police. In the film, Nell is allowed to leave
the hotel when she is ready, followed by the police officers.
◊ The novel ends in the Jones’s two adjoining
hotel rooms, not in the hotel lobby, as it does in the film. In the novel, the
characters are left alone and disillusioned after Nell is taken away.
◊
The film ends with a focus
on Nell, Lyn, and Jed in the hotel lobby and some hope for the future. In the film,
Jed vows to stand by Nell and help her in her recovery. His decision restores
Lyn’s faith in the future of her relationship with Jed.
The
shifts in the narrative in the film version allows the story to focus on Nell
as a troubled character and on Lyn and Jed’s relationship. Viewers of the film
have several characters to relate to. I found the characters in the novel to be
much more distant and unlikable. Armstrong’s novel is well written: I have no
problem with the technical aspects of the writing and the narrative. It did
occur to me, however, that the brevity of the narrative is a plus because it
was so difficult to spend time with the characters!
I enjoyed
the film version (Don’t Bother to Knock)
so much more. Lyn Lesley is a stronger character in the film. She is in control
of her emotions and knows what she wants. Her relationship with Jed is on much
more of an equal footing. In the film, both Jed and Nell are also much more
sympathetic. Jed undergoes a transformation in the film, and he finally sees
what Lyn means to him and how he can give her what she needs. Nell has a more
sympathetic back story and she gets to tell it herself to Jed. She is treated
more fairly by Jed and others around her because they (and the viewers) get to
see her as a human being deserving of help rather than as a person to be taken
away and locked up.
I can
recommend the film Don’t Bother to Knock
wholeheartedly, the novel not quite as much. Still, I am very glad I read it
because it is the basis of the film. I found it fascinating how the narrative
could be reshaped into something that I enjoyed more on film.
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